Power has a great possibility to corrupt someone. It is a lure for people since absolute power can mean doing anything by their wish. Many greedy people, especially those who have a high chance of becoming a leader or president, yearn for power and they are willing to do absolutely everything in order to gain that power. This results in illegal actions, such as assassination towards the rulers. In addition, when they’re in position of that power, the rulers tend to forget their original goals of helping others and building a better country for the citizens. They become too conceited because the citizens often admire and respect them.
Henry VI was one of the worst rulers of
England. He abused his power as a monarch by choosing favourites to help him
rule the country. Even worse was the fact that he wasn’t interested in his
duties as a king. Under his rule, the citizens’ lives were not secured since he
wasn’t interested in war either. Soon, he was defeated and captured. This is a
common ending for monarchs who only want the absolute power as a ruler instead
of taking on the role as a ruler seriously.
In contrast, Steve Jobs has successfully done
his job as the director of a company. Even though, he has been a dictator in
some ways, he led the company to a great success and created popular inventions,
such as iphone. He had total power over the whole company, but he used his
power correctly by choosing the talented people to work with him and working as
hard as anyone else even though he was the director.
In
summary, don’t forget your reason for being in the position where you have absolute
power. Power can lead to corruption when one abuses it and uses it for illegal
activities, such as using the tax money to buy personal possessions. It could also
lead to success when being used accurately. Whether or not power corrupts, it
all depends on the person who holds it.
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ReplyDeleteI like what you have written for this task. You gave an example of a dictator/monarch who has been corrupted and blinded by power, and another who has led a company to great success instead. As Ms.Lees said, try to avoid conjunctions, such as "don't" or "isn't". But overall, I would say that you have backed up your statement well and you have done a great job.
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